Since completing and submitting all five Unit 5 products two weeks ago, I have conducted a focus group and started writing up my Evaluation E assessor/peer review for Unit 6. The focus group was conducted on Friday the 18th March with five peers and lasted approximately 20 minutes. In that interview, I presented each of my campaign products individually to the group and asked them questions related to the products, such as what they thought about the colour scheme of each product, what they thought of the slogan and title choices, what they thought about the layout/positioning of each element on each page, and how effective they felt the imagery was in delivering the campaign's message clearly and capturing the audience's attention.
As a result of conducting the interview, I received detailed constructive criticism, both positive and negative, on which elements of each product the group felt were effective and complimentary of the campaign's message, and which elements could be improved in order to meet the standards and requirements of the campaign's message. For example, I received complimentary comments regarding the magazine cover's text font, as well as positive feedback regarding the magazine article's layout and how "professional" it's presentation looked, but a peer in the group felt that the poster and email's message was not clear in what it's trying to convey through the imagery, and suggested ways in which the statistic information at the bottom of the page could be worded differently so that the imagery makes more sense to the audience.
Similarly, I received an assessor review from my teacher and gained a detailed insight into which elements of each product could be improved. For example, adjusting the brightness/contrast of various imagery to make them clearer, as when printed, they were darker than they were supposed to be and as a result weren't as clear as I'd intended for them to be and looked too "black". Therefore I plan on making these corrections and acting upon the criticism I have received from my peers as well as my assessor in order to produce more professional-looking products that serve the purpose of engaging the audience well and conveying the message more successfully and effective stylistically.
For the remainder of the week, I intend to complete my assessor/peer review for Unit 6 in lessons and free periods, which I started earlier today. For this review, I am required to write up about the feedback I received from the group, which involves including quotes to show the detailed criticism my products received, as well as discuss ways in which the group felt the products could be improved/what I intend to edit or re-do. In Monday and Tuesday's lessons, we are required to write up Evaluation C in exam conditions which refers to the relation between the products we made for Unit 5 and past and current professional work, therefore I plan on working on the review until Wednesday or Thursday, and hand it as soon as possible so it's completed by the time we are required to write up Evaluation E in the lessons on Monday and Tuesday.